CV and Role Description

Hello,

could someone tell me whether this CV/resumé is acceptable?

Here goes:
Curriculum Vitae

Personal Details
Name: Name
Address: Street 7
12345 Town

Nationality: German
Date of Birth: 17 May 1981
Place of Birth: Nuremberg
Marital Status: married

Work Experience:
March 2006 - September 2009 Assistant clerk

December 2003 - February 2006 Maternity leave (or would it be more suitable to write "Child care", because in Germany parents have three years off?)

July 2000 - November 2003 Payroll clerk

Responsibilities:
- Payrolling of 200 employees
- Issuing of certifications
- Contact person for health insurances

Qualifications:
June 2000 Final Exam as an Office clerk
July 1997 school-leaving certificate "Mittlere Reife"

Skills:
Languages German - native speaker, Englisch - basics
Others Computer literate: familiar with MS Office, Navision
shorthand basics

Role description:
Role description of a person responsible for payroll accounting:
- does the payroll of the whole staff
- issues different certifications
- collaborates with health insurances
- verifies both residence and work permits as well as employment papers
- files and compiles records

Thanks in advance
Robert