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B2utyaigul Posted 11 years ago
Letter Writing
CV
Hi, Please hep me with my CV. This is my first time writing it. i supposed there are lots of mistakes. Thanks in advance.
CURRICULUM VITAE
Name: ….
Address: 4a, Yanushkevich street
Telephone: …
Fax: …. Is this important?
Date and place of birth: 7 February ….
Nationality: …
E- Mail: ……
EDUCATION AND TRAINING
• 2013-2015: L.N. Gumilyov, Eurasian National University, Kazakhstan, Bachelor of International Relations specialty
• 2002-2013: school-lyceum named after M.Zhumabayev. Completion of high school with a comprehensive mark of 100%, A+.
• 2004-2009: “Zhas Daryn” Musical School, Class of dombyra - Kazakh’s national instrument
HONORS AND ACHIEVEMENTS
• Selected for a volunteer at 47th Annual Meeting of the Board of Governors of the Asian Development Bank
• An active member of Center of Youth Policy organization at our university
• Winner of competition of volunteer projects “Master English and Realize Your Dream”
• Winner of a prize “Altyn Belgi” for completing high school with an overall average of at least 97%.
• Final grade for high school: 100%.
PERSONAL SKILLS AND COMPETENCIES
LANGUAGES
• Kazakh: mother tongue
• English: upper-intermediate: IELTS – 6.5 writing and listening – 7.0; reading and speaking 6.0
• Korean: beginner level have certificate from Korean Culture Center in Kazakhstan
• Spanish: beginner level
OTHER SKILLS AND COMPETENCIES
• Excellent computer skills: Word, Excel, Internet.
• Ability to handle multiple tasks, to meet deadlines and to work in a team. Strong organizational skills and problem-solving
INTERESTS
I love traveling around the world and getting to know new people. I’m also very keen on music and volunteering.
CURRICULUM VITAE
Name: ….
Address: 4a, Yanushkevich street
Telephone: …
Fax: …. Is this important?
Date and place of birth: 7 February ….
Nationality: …
E- Mail: ……
EDUCATION AND TRAINING
• 2013-2015: L.N. Gumilyov, Eurasian National University, Kazakhstan, Bachelor of International Relations specialty
• 2002-2013: school-lyceum named after M.Zhumabayev. Completion of high school with a comprehensive mark of 100%, A+.
• 2004-2009: “Zhas Daryn” Musical School, Class of dombyra - Kazakh’s national instrument
HONORS AND ACHIEVEMENTS
• Selected for a volunteer at 47th Annual Meeting of the Board of Governors of the Asian Development Bank
• An active member of Center of Youth Policy organization at our university
• Winner of competition of volunteer projects “Master English and Realize Your Dream”
• Winner of a prize “Altyn Belgi” for completing high school with an overall average of at least 97%.
• Final grade for high school: 100%.
PERSONAL SKILLS AND COMPETENCIES
LANGUAGES
• Kazakh: mother tongue
• English: upper-intermediate: IELTS – 6.5 writing and listening – 7.0; reading and speaking 6.0
• Korean: beginner level have certificate from Korean Culture Center in Kazakhstan
• Spanish: beginner level
OTHER SKILLS AND COMPETENCIES
• Excellent computer skills: Word, Excel, Internet.
• Ability to handle multiple tasks, to meet deadlines and to work in a team. Strong organizational skills and problem-solving
INTERESTS
I love traveling around the world and getting to know new people. I’m also very keen on music and volunteering.
Top answer
If I were to read this CV, I would have no idea of what kind of job you would be qualified for or even interested in. Everything is too abstract and general. Internet is not a computer skill.
- If I were to read this CV, I would have no idea of what kind of job you would be qualified for or even interested in.
- Everything is too abstract and general.
- Internet is not a computer skill.
- Designing web sites, Android apps, or databases are computer skills.
- A "volunteer" could be any kind of duty, from handing out leaflets to cleaning up tables.
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If I were to read this CV, I would have no idea of what kind of job you would be qualified for or even interested in. Everything is too abstract and general.
Internet is not a computer skill. Designing web sites, Android apps, or databases are computer skills.
A "volunteer" could be any kind of duty, from handing out leaflets to cleaning up tables.
Be more specific.
Internet is not a computer skill. Designing web sites, Android apps, or databases are computer skills.
A "volunteer" could be any kind of duty, from handing out leaflets to cleaning up tables.
Be more specific.
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This CV is for Erasmus Mundus echange programm. How should I make it for such program?
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Be more specific, especially describing your volunteer work:
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As a volunteer, I entertained autistic children weekly for 18 months, playing and singing traditional Kazakh folk songs to them. The nurses said that they responded very well to my music and it improved their ability to communicate through the medium of familiar music. I was happy to see how they changed in a positive w
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As a volunteer, I entertained autistic children weekly for 18 months, playing and singing traditional Kazakh folk songs to them. The nurses said that they responded very well to my music and it improved their ability to communicate through the medium of familiar music. I was happy to see how they changed in a positive w
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