Just one correction to the english:- Played with the children and took them on walks And a suggestion:- 'entertainment' - sound like sitting them infront of the TV, so you might want to say 'fun learning activites' instead. You also might want to say a bit more about your personality. If people are going to leave their children in your care they will want to be sure you are a nice person.
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