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User_gary Posted 18 years ago
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cut into pieces by a train wheel

Yesterday I saw a college girl who had been cut into pieces by a train wheel. The girl was trying to get on the train after the train started moving, so she fell down under the train and died. I fainted when I saw that tragedy. [it's a true incident]

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Nasty! I am not at all surprised you fainted. The only change I would make it: ".

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Nasty! I am not at all surprised you fainted.

The only change I would make it: "....after it started to move, but she fell under the train and was killed."
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Yesterday I saw a college girl run over by the wheel of a train and get cut into pieces. The girl was trying to get on the train after the train started moving, and she slipped under the train's wheel and died. I fainted when I saw that tragedy.

I am sorry that
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The request for help that an Anon posted to this thread has been moved to a different section:



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