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André Posted 21 years ago
Letter Writing
Curriculum Vitae
Hi, (Edited by mod to remove names)
I'm a new user, in this site. I hope that's the correct forum. Please help me to fix my Curriculum Vitae.
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My name is aaaaa. I was born on 1st july 1980 as the oldest son of bbbbbbb and his wife ccccccccc(born dddddddddd) in Musterhausen - Saxony. In Musterhausen, I live together with my parents and my brother eeeeeeeee, who is 18 years old.
From 1991 to 1994 I was attending the 140. Primary school in Musterhausen . After that I continued my compulsory education at the 141. Secondary School, at which I passed my o-levels (?, oder GCSE? --> Gernal Certificate of Secondary Eduction) in 2001. Later I attended the vocational High School in Musterdorf, choosing the profile "communications and information technology". My achievement courses were German and Computer Science. In the year 2004 I left the High School after reaching the a-level. After I left school I first decided to do my civil service at the university clinic in Musterhausen . During this time I was predominantly working in the personal administration. There I closely co-operated with nurses of the individual wards and together with them I created new rosters and time management solutions.
Since September 2005 I am now busy as an apprentice as the specialized computer scientist for system integration at the Mustermann AG.
During my spare time I spend much time with my friends, become acquainted with always nice new people and communicate with many humans world-wide over the InterNet. I have certain skills in dealing with MS Office and basic knowledges in various programming languages, among them Javascript, Delphi, C++ as well as PHP.
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I'm a new user, in this site. I hope that's the correct forum. Please help me to fix my Curriculum Vitae.
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My name is aaaaa. I was born on 1st july 1980 as the oldest son of bbbbbbb and his wife ccccccccc(born dddddddddd) in Musterhausen - Saxony. In Musterhausen, I live together with my parents and my brother eeeeeeeee, who is 18 years old.
From 1991 to 1994 I was attending the 140. Primary school in Musterhausen . After that I continued my compulsory education at the 141. Secondary School, at which I passed my o-levels (?, oder GCSE? --> Gernal Certificate of Secondary Eduction) in 2001. Later I attended the vocational High School in Musterdorf, choosing the profile "communications and information technology". My achievement courses were German and Computer Science. In the year 2004 I left the High School after reaching the a-level. After I left school I first decided to do my civil service at the university clinic in Musterhausen . During this time I was predominantly working in the personal administration. There I closely co-operated with nurses of the individual wards and together with them I created new rosters and time management solutions.
Since September 2005 I am now busy as an apprentice as the specialized computer scientist for system integration at the Mustermann AG.
During my spare time I spend much time with my friends, become acquainted with always nice new people and communicate with many humans world-wide over the InterNet. I have certain skills in dealing with MS Office and basic knowledges in various programming languages, among them Javascript, Delphi, C++ as well as PHP.
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Hi Andre, This needs a lot of work. It is usual to lay out a CV in a more formal manner rather than as a letter. A good format is Your details: Name, address, contact details, date of birth.
- Hi Andre, This needs a lot of work.
- It is usual to lay out a CV in a more formal manner rather than as a letter.
- A good format is Your details: Name, address, contact details, date of birth.
- (Drop all the stuff about your family, utterly irrelevant and including it in CV makes you lsound peculiar).
- Personal Statement - just a short paragraph describing your self and your aspirations, for example, I am a non-smoker.
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Hi Andre,
This needs a lot of work. It is usual to lay out a CV in a more formal manner rather than as a letter. A good format is
Your details: Name, address, contact details, date of birth. (Drop all the stuff about your family, utterly irrelevant and including it in CV makes you lsound peculiar).
Personal Statement - just a short paragraph describing your
This needs a lot of work. It is usual to lay out a CV in a more formal manner rather than as a letter. A good format is
Your details: Name, address, contact details, date of birth. (Drop all the stuff about your family, utterly irrelevant and including it in CV makes you lsound peculiar).
Personal Statement - just a short paragraph describing your
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