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Anonymous Posted 19 years ago
Grammar

Currently in the Armed Forces. need help

My Staff Sergeant has tasked me with. When I gave it back, he was unhappy. Am I right? Ill give you my version and his:

My version:
LCPL JONES WAS DISORDERLY IN CONDUCT. WHILE MARRIED AT THE TIME, LCPL JONES HAD AN INAPPROPRIETE RELATIOINSHIP WITH A WOMEN, NOT HIS WIFE.

SSGT's version:
LCPL JONES DISPLAYED DISORDERLY CONDUCT, WHILE MARRIED AT THE TIME, BY HAVING INAPPROPRIETE RELATIOINSHIP WITH A WOMEN, NOT HIS WIFE.
  

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Hi, My version: LCPL JONES WAS DISORDERLY IN CONDUCT . WHILE MARRIED AT THE TIME , LCPL JONES HAD AN INAPPROPRIETE RELATIOINSHIP WITH A WOMEN , NOT HIS WIFE . SSGT's version: LCPL JONES DISPLAYED DISORDERLY CONDUCT, WHILE MARRIED AT THE TIME, BY HAVING INAPPROPRIETE RELATIOINSHIP WITH A WOMEN, NOT HIS WIFE LCPL JONES DISPLAYED DISORDERLY CONDUCT WHILE MARRIED, BY HAVING AN INAPPROPRIATE RELATIONSHIP WITH A WOMAN NOT HIS WIFE.

— Clive

  • Hi, My version: LCPL JONES WAS DISORDERLY IN CONDUCT .
  • WHILE MARRIED AT THE TIME , LCPL JONES HAD AN INAPPROPRIETE RELATIOINSHIP WITH A WOMEN , NOT HIS WIFE .
  • SSGT's version: LCPL JONES DISPLAYED DISORDERLY CONDUCT, WHILE MARRIED AT THE TIME, BY HAVING INAPPROPRIETE RELATIOINSHIP WITH A WOMEN, NOT HIS WIFE LCPL JONES DISPLAYED DISORDERLY CONDUCT WHILE MARRIED, BY HAVING AN INAPPROPRIATE RELATIONSHIP WITH A WOMAN NOT HIS WIFE.
  • I assume LCPL is the appropriate rank abbreviation in your army.
  • ' is the abbreviation for 'corporal'.
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Hi,

My version:
LCPL JONES WAS DISORDERLY IN CONDUCT. WHILE MARRIED AT THE TIME, LCPL JONES HAD AN INAPPROPRIETE RELATIOINSHIP WITH A WOMEN, NOT HIS WIFE.

SSGT's version:
LCPL JONES DISPLAYED DISORDERLY CONDUCT, WHILE MARRIED AT THE TIME, BY HAVING INAPPROPRIETE RELATIOINSHIP WITH A WOMEN, N
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