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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
Grammar

Cry for help:Formal letter

Hello, teachers.

I have a question,

I'm ordering something online... and at the same time... i want to tell that particular seller that in case things go well...between us... i'd like to offer him my advertising services.. and commercial his product ..here in my country .. as a coporation... between both sides..(buyer & seller).

So again my questions is .. how do I say it formally.. no matter how many times i try to write formally.. it doesn't work.

This is how far i can get.

Dear madam/sir

I'd like to buy from you ......, the product code is:.......
I live in ........so can I still get the set free shipped? Are you dealing with shipping companies such as fedEx or DHL? Can I have clearer photos for the specified set?

PS
Would like me to.. ???? no i don't think so..

another try

In case things go well??? not really

Yours sincerely,

.....

Thanks in advance, Emotion: smile
  

Top answer

Dear Sir: I have ordered your product, the super widget, Model AA, and look forward to using it personally. I think this product would be very popular in my city / country, and I know you would be interested in increasing your sales here. I have a successful local advertising company,with a base sales volume of $100,000 per year, which has been increasing at 20% per year for the past 3 years.

— AlpheccaStars

  • Dear Sir: I have ordered your product, the super widget, Model AA, and look forward to using it personally.
  • I think this product would be very popular in my city / country, and I know you would be interested in increasing your sales here.
  • I have a successful local advertising company,with a base sales volume of $100,000 per year, which has been increasing at 20% per year for the past 3 years.
  • My advertizing and marketing is very successful; I have boosted the manufacturer's local sales volume on an average of 30%.
  • I know how to present the products in a way that appeals to my local culture, and through the most effective communication channels.
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Dear Sir:

I have ordered your product, the super widget, Model AA, and look forward to using it personally. I think this product would be very popular in my city / country, and I know you would be interested in increasing your sales here. I have a successful local advertising company,with a base sales volume of $100,000 per year, which has been increasing at 20% per year for the past 3
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Thanks for your help, AlpheccaStars.

I think this product would be very popular in my city / country, and I know you would be interested in increasing your sales here. I know how to present the products in a way that appeals to my local culture, and through the most effective communication channels. If your product works as advertised for me, I would like to explore a business relations
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