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Anonymous Posted 13 years ago
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crush or dent

This sentence needs a makeover. I think the point is clear, but is the it natural?
He filled up a water bottle of the tap, and as the water was filling up, and the bottle got heavy, he would grip the water bottle more firmly and dented it/crushed it.

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He filled a water bottle from the tap, and as the water was filling and the bottle got heavy, he gripped the water bottle more firmly and dented it/crushed it.

  • He filled a water bottle from the tap, and as the water was filling and the bottle got heavy, he gripped the water bottle more firmly and dented it/crushed it.
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He filled a water bottle from the tap, and as the water was filling and the bottle got heavy, he gripped the water bottle more firmly and dented it/crushed it.

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