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Blue-eyed Smiler Posted 19 years ago
Cruel love
I am so cruel.
I was cruel to let you come in,
when I needed badly to foget,
you were just my toy that now can bleed,
having served as cure from regret.
I have played, I played the love and hate.
I have played the feelings I don't have.
I am sorry, but I cannot play all of them by any rate.
Now I feel so empty and so dark, like a monster to have
torn your soul.
And I am a heartless monstrous shark with a face of
brand-new-beauty doll.
Even dolls, though, have a heart which beats.
I can't let you kiss my lips today
as they are icy as they always were.
I can't let you touch my skin -
The doll's package on display.
Icy soul is what I have,
frozen look is what I give.
If you want to save yourself,
than give way and let me leave.
I was cruel to let you come in,
when I needed badly to foget,
you were just my toy that now can bleed,
having served as cure from regret.
I have played, I played the love and hate.
I have played the feelings I don't have.
I am sorry, but I cannot play all of them by any rate.
Now I feel so empty and so dark, like a monster to have
torn your soul.
And I am a heartless monstrous shark with a face of
brand-new-beauty doll.
Even dolls, though, have a heart which beats.
I can't let you kiss my lips today
as they are icy as they always were.
I can't let you touch my skin -
The doll's package on display.
Icy soul is what I have,
frozen look is what I give.
If you want to save yourself,
than give way and let me leave.
Top answer
Some forced efforts to rhyme in there-- love and hate, by any rate -- and then the rhyme disappears. You need to focus less on the emotions and more on what you are up to (writing a poem).
- Some forced efforts to rhyme in there-- love and hate, by any rate -- and then the rhyme disappears.
- You need to focus less on the emotions and more on what you are up to (writing a poem).
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Some forced efforts to rhyme in there-- love and hate, by any rate-- and then the rhyme disappears. You need to focus less on the emotions and more on what you are up to (writing a poem).
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love is something very difficult to understand, some people say that love is when u want someone with u, and only with u, someother think that love is ehn u feel happy for other people. maybe love is a mixture of both thoughts, may be it is not...
who knows!
who knows!
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Blue-eyed SmilerEven dolls, though, have a heart which beats.
What heart? The battery? The dinamo? :/
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