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User_gary Posted 18 years ago
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crowds of students

You can see crowds all around the university campus during admission times. There will be separate ques for taking admission forms, for submission of forms, for verification of forms and for enquiries. Thus You can see crowds of students all over the campus.

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You can see crowds of students all over the university campus during the admission period . There are separate queues for picking up admission forms, for submitting forms, for verifying forms and for enquiries.

  • You can see crowds of students all over the university campus during the admission period .
  • There are separate queues for picking up admission forms, for submitting forms, for verifying forms and for enquiries.
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You can see crowds of students all over the university campus during the admission period. There are separate queues for picking up admission forms, for submitting forms, for verifying forms and for enquiries.
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Picking up the admission form sounds to me as if we pick something up from somewhere but in the university we take admission forms. I mean there is a counter through which admission forms are distributed by university staffs and we take by holding out our hands.

Please help me in this regard.
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Pick up is the colloquial English for what you do, Gary.

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