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User_gary Posted 16 years ago
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Crowded platform/trains, crowd/rush fades away
It would be rush between 3 pm. to 5 p.m. on trains but by 6.30 it gradally/slowly fades away. So I think around 7 p.m. if we set out for the journey would be perfect time to travel in a train.
It's very crowded on trains and platforms alike now, but I think if we wait for another half an hour the crowd/rush would be reduced/come to down/faded away and we can travel easily.
I don't like to get on/travel on crowded/packed train.
I can see even all platforms(train) are crowded.
It put me off as soon as I saw crowded platforms so I took a taxi and went off.
Please correct my sentences and suggest me better colloqual or common versions. Somehow I feel "fade away" is also a more of formal word.
It's very crowded on trains and platforms alike now, but I think if we wait for another half an hour the crowd/rush would be reduced/come to down/faded away and we can travel easily.
I don't like to get on/travel on crowded/packed train.
I can see even all platforms(train) are crowded.
It put me off as soon as I saw crowded platforms so I took a taxi and went off.
Please correct my sentences and suggest me better colloqual or common versions. Somehow I feel "fade away" is also a more of formal word.
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30 it will have tapered off. So I think i f we set out for the journey around 7, it would be perfect. It's very crowded on the trains and platforms now , but I think if we wait for another half an hour, the crowd/rush will thin out and we can travel easily.
- 30 it will have tapered off.
- So I think i f we set out for the journey around 7, it would be perfect.
- It's very crowded on the trains and platforms now , but I think if we wait for another half an hour, the crowd/rush will thin out and we can travel easily.
- I don't like to get on/travel on crowded/packed trains.
- I see that even all the platforms are crowded.
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There'll be a rush on the trains between 3 and 5 pm, but by 6.30 it will have tapered off. So I think if we set out for the journey around 7, it would be perfect.
It's very crowded on the trains and platforms now, but I think if we wait for another half an hour, the crowd/rush will thin out and we can travel easily.
I don't
It's very crowded on the trains and platforms now, but I think if we wait for another half an hour, the crowd/rush will thin out and we can travel easily.
I don't
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