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Beatrix Posted 20 years ago

critics me

Odd Truth

A pace i walk through,
seems all untrue,
the pride sore,
distroy the core,

sing a lullaby,
kiss the angel of death goodbye,
passionate thou should never try,
things come unseparate stuff untie,

boredom,
feels the cold of isolated room,
cries for the death groom,
flipping the happiness to gloom,

cares not my skin,
touch not my heart,
what it feels like of a win,
when i only know one's being apart


  

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Hi there, You might want to check some of your spellings. Hope that helps.

  • Hi there, You might want to check some of your spellings.
  • Hope that helps.
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Hi there,

You might want to check some of your spellings.

Hope that helps.
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Thanks a lot Julielai...

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