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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago

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I can smell violence in the air like the lash of coming rainmass hatreds drifting grey across the moon It hovers brooding, posed like a cobra as Igo prodding rat-holes and sounding caverns looking for a fang that darts a hood that sways and eyes that squirt a reptile hate.
  

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Hi, I like it, but my mundane comment is that I would like it more if you put each section on a separate line. Clive

— Clive

  • Hi, I like it, but my mundane comment is that I would like it more if you put each section on a separate line.
  • Clive
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Hi,

I like it, but my mundane comment is that I would like it more if you put each section on a separate line.

Clive
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