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Crime

We are now living in a world where there exists a great number of crime commitments. The extent and level have become more dangerous and favorably increase throughout the time counting back from World War II. There are reasons to explain this negative sensation. To have the deepest understanding, we must focus on many aspects of genetics and the environment. The idea that crime and genes have some correlation is the information I have just discovered. According to a research of 14,000 adopted children, a significant number of them, regardless of the teaching method of adopting parents, are likely to engage in property-related crimes if their birth parents had a record of committing criminal acts. However, the core problem remains in the environmental factors. First, with the dramatic promotion of advanced technologies, especially in the robotics area, producing processes have been automated, jobs using hands have been gradually replaced by robots as they are able to do laborious tasks repetitively without relaxation like humans. Unemployees who are under great financial burden cannot do anything to make ends meet, so they resort to breaking the law. A large majority of young people whose psychological growth are not fully developed are constantly exposed to bloody, violent scenes on the Internet. Moreover, their parents cannot supervise them every single moment due to the heavy workload. There are several factors contributing to major crimes such as murder, faking currency, fraud,... So how do things go when it comes to minor crime? Why do humans disobey the law? I am not sure that this action is rooted in the instinct to cross the line or not and the government needs to build a framework to control society and maintain human sanity. Some people reckon small bad acts do nothing and cannot affect others. No one will question their personality and figure out their misbehaviors. However, in reality, with every bad action, they will be judged and criticized by strangers, not by their words but in their minds. That is why we must be aware of the proportionality in our behaviors and treatments. The discrepancies in the living standard and condition are also linked to the level of the crime rate. It is easily acknowledged that a huge percentage of crime is in metropolis cities, which is as I mentioned before, belongs to unemployment. There exists a favorable gap in relation to income between the rich and the people under breadline. Witnessing a wide range of villas and apartments next to slumps is an inevitable thing in hustle and bustle cities. With the promotion of wealth, people tend to become more materialistic and build a belief that prosperity equals success and happiness. Many ladies wear a bunch of jewelry and expensive bags when they go outside in order to show off and they may become a victim of a robbery. Things go differently in rural areas. As the citizens are likely to move to big cities finding a variety of jobs. The mothers and old people who are staying do not have the tendency to commit a crime. They just want to live a peaceful and simple life without much assess possession.

  

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Hi You need to organize your essay in paragraphs. At the start, as a title, put the topic or question,that you are going to write about. Now write the following.

  • Hi You need to organize your essay in paragraphs.
  • At the start, as a title, put the topic or question,that you are going to write about.
  • Now write the following.
  • An introductory paragraph.
  • One paragraph for each of your 3 or 4 main points.
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Hi

You need to organize your essay in paragraphs.

At the start, as a title, put the topic or question,that you are going to write about.

Now write the following.

An introductory paragraph.

One paragraph for each of your 3 or 4 main points.

A conclusion paragraph.

Have you studied yet how to write in paragraphs?

Clive

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