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Creativeguru Posted 18 years ago
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Creating suspense...kindly check

I want to create supense, hype around the jewellery brand saying something is coming for modern woman & limited edition. Kindly suggest me if you could something better than the following

'Master craftsmen work in town, limited edition- 88 pieces only, for the woman of today'.
  

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Are you 1 of the exclusive 88? There are only 88 - created by our Master Craftsmen. Designed with elegance for today's woman.

  • Are you 1 of the exclusive 88?
  • There are only 88 - created by our Master Craftsmen.
  • Designed with elegance for today's woman.
  • Millions will be disappointed.
  • Are you ready to be one?
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Are you 1 of the exclusive 88?

There are only 88 - created by our Master Craftsmen.

Designed with elegance for today's woman.

Millions will be disappointed.

Are you ready to be one?

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