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Angliholic Posted 19 years ago
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created a complicated scam to steal money from strangers

The two thieves created a complicated scam to steal money from strangers.

The two thieves produced/made a sophiticated fraud/scheme to rob/cheat strangers of their money.

The second of the above two versions is how I render the first one, and I doubt if they are all right. Feel free to correct my errors. Thanks.
  

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The two thieves made a sophisticated scheme to rob/cheat strangers of their money.

  • The two thieves made a sophisticated scheme to rob/cheat strangers of their money.
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The two thieves made a sophisticated scheme to rob/cheat strangers of their money.

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AngliholicThe two thieves created a complicated scam to steal money from strangers.

The two thieves produced/made a sophisticated fraud/scheme to rob/cheat strangers of their money.

The second of the above two ver
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AngliholicThe two thieves created a complicated scam to steal money from strangers.

The two thieves produced/made a sophisticated fraud/scheme to rob/cheat strangers of their money.
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As a footnote: you might want consider "devised", and a gerund rather than an infinitive, e.g.

1. The two men devised a complicated scheme for defrauding the Inland Revenue.

MrP
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MrPedanticAs a footnote: you might want consider "devised", and a gerund rather than an infinitive, e.g.

1. The two men devised a complicated scheme for defrauding the Inland Revenue.

MrP

Thanks, Pedantic.

Your version sounds very valid to me--The two men devised a complicate scheme for defrauding the In
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Sorry, yes, I should have explained.

The Inland Revenue department administers the collection of income tax in the UK. (In fact, it merged with the HM Customs and Excise department a couple of years ago, to form the HM Revenue & Customs department; but "the Inland Revenue" is still a common term. Cf. "the taxman", which means the same thing.)

MrP

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