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Vsuresh Posted 12 years ago
Grammar
cramped
Hi
Please tell me if this sentence is OK.
Your message suffers from lack of clarity; too many ideas have been cramped.
Please tell me if this sentence is OK.
Your message suffers from lack of clarity; too many ideas have been cramped.
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It doesn't seem quite right. It may be that you are confusing "cramped" and "crammed". You could say: Your message suffers from (a) lack of clarity; too many ideas have been crammed into it.
- It doesn't seem quite right.
- It may be that you are confusing "cramped" and "crammed".
- You could say: Your message suffers from (a) lack of clarity; too many ideas have been crammed into it.
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It doesn't seem quite right. It may be that you are confusing "cramped" and "crammed". You could say:
Your message suffers from (a) lack of clarity; too many ideas have been crammed into it.
Your message suffers from (a) lack of clarity; too many ideas have been crammed into it.
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GPYIt doesn't seem quite right. It may be that you are confusing "cramped" and "crammed".Yes. Thank you for the changes, GPY.
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