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Vasuarm Posted 17 years ago
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Crackers
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Come Diwali, uncle would give me bundles of sparklers, flowerpots, chakras and ladies’ special crackers. Once, when a misfired cracker burnt my fingers and holed up my new Diwali silk skirt, mom asked me to remain home. The throbbing pain I had on my fingers was less painful than my longing to go out and burst the remaining crackers. Fortunately, I had uncle by my side. He rushed home earlier and laughed at the big bandage I was having in my hand. “Hey, pretty,” he shouted at me. “Get into your feet. Buck up. Let us finish off the remaining crackers.” I got rejuvenated by uncle’s remarks and stood on my legs. We then burst out all the crackers in the bundle and made a bonfire of the smoldering remains of the burst out crackers. ‘A great day and a great man’, I thought.
Come Diwali, uncle would give me bundles of sparklers, flowerpots, chakras and ladies’ special crackers. Once, when a misfired cracker burnt my fingers and holed up my new Diwali silk skirt, mom asked me to remain home. The throbbing pain I had on my fingers was less painful than my longing to go out and burst the remaining crackers. Fortunately, I had uncle by my side. He rushed home earlier and laughed at the big bandage I was having in my hand. “Hey, pretty,” he shouted at me. “Get into your feet. Buck up. Let us finish off the remaining crackers.” I got rejuvenated by uncle’s remarks and stood on my legs. We then burst out all the crackers in the bundle and made a bonfire of the smoldering remains of the burst out crackers. ‘A great day and a great man’, I thought.
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At Diwali, Uncle would give me bundles of sparklers, flowerpots, chakras and special ladies' crackers. Once, when a misfired cracker burnt my fingers and burnt a hole in my new Diwali silk skirt, Mom told me to stay home , but the throbbing in my fingers was less painful than my longing to go out and burst the remaining crackers. Fortunately, I had Uncle on my side.
- At Diwali, Uncle would give me bundles of sparklers, flowerpots, chakras and special ladies' crackers.
- Once, when a misfired cracker burnt my fingers and burnt a hole in my new Diwali silk skirt, Mom told me to stay home , but the throbbing in my fingers was less painful than my longing to go out and burst the remaining crackers.
- Fortunately, I had Uncle on my side.
- He had rushed home and laughed at the big bandage on my hand.
- "Hey, cutie ," he shouted at me, "get on your feet !
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At Diwali, Uncle would give me bundles of sparklers, flowerpots, chakras and special ladies' crackers.
Once, when a misfired cracker burnt my fingers and burnt a hole in my new Diwali silk skirt, Mom told me to stay home, but the throbbing in my fingers was less painful than my longing to go out and burst the remaining crackers. For
Once, when a misfired cracker burnt my fingers and burnt a hole in my new Diwali silk skirt, Mom told me to stay home, but the throbbing in my fingers was less painful than my longing to go out and burst the remaining crackers. For
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