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Cheese1987 Posted 16 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Covering letter. Anyone help me to correct my mistakes?
Dear Miss Wong,
I am sending you my resume in response to the above position you advertised in Interactive Employment Service of the Labour Department
I got 3As in Hong Kong Advanced Level Examination including Chinese History, Chinese Literature and History in 2006. After sitting for HKALE, I studied in The Chinese University of Hong Kong. My major is Chinese Language and Literature. In these 3 years, I had taken some courses related to Chinese Literature such as Modern Drama, Kung Qu (??) and Literature and Arts. In addition, I had studied some elective courses such as Survey of Western Music, Xi Qu and Culture and In pursuit of Hong Kong Art and Culture. I am confident that I have competent knowledge of Arts.
I got a second prize and in liuqin junior class and a third prize in advanced class in Hong Kong Schools Music Festival. In addition, I have been performer since I was form1 . Recently, I have just perform in Culture Centre and City Hall with my orchestra. With my experience in performance, I believe I have the qualifications to succeed in the above position.
I believe I have the skills that your company is seeking. Enclosed please find my resume and for your evaluation. I would love to share with you my enthusiasm for Arts.
I look forward to meeting you personally.
Yours sincerely
Cindy Chan
I am sending you my resume in response to the above position you advertised in Interactive Employment Service of the Labour Department
I got 3As in Hong Kong Advanced Level Examination including Chinese History, Chinese Literature and History in 2006. After sitting for HKALE, I studied in The Chinese University of Hong Kong. My major is Chinese Language and Literature. In these 3 years, I had taken some courses related to Chinese Literature such as Modern Drama, Kung Qu (??) and Literature and Arts. In addition, I had studied some elective courses such as Survey of Western Music, Xi Qu and Culture and In pursuit of Hong Kong Art and Culture. I am confident that I have competent knowledge of Arts.
I got a second prize and in liuqin junior class and a third prize in advanced class in Hong Kong Schools Music Festival. In addition, I have been performer since I was form1 . Recently, I have just perform in Culture Centre and City Hall with my orchestra. With my experience in performance, I believe I have the qualifications to succeed in the above position.
I believe I have the skills that your company is seeking. Enclosed please find my resume and for your evaluation. I would love to share with you my enthusiasm for Arts.
I look forward to meeting you personally.
Yours sincerely
Cindy Chan
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You need to state in the first paragraph you're applying for the position (and which position it is). You also need to explain how your qualifications and the job requirements are a good match.
- You need to state in the first paragraph you're applying for the position (and which position it is).
- You also need to explain how your qualifications and the job requirements are a good match.
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You need to state in the first paragraph you're applying for the position (and which position it is). You also need to explain how your qualifications and the job requirements are a good match.
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