Cover Note Correction for internal job?

Hi everyone, can someone help me with the correction of this covernote?

Your help is much appreciated.

Thank you!

Dear Mrs. xxx,

I would like to apply for the position as Underwriting Associate. I have reviewed the job description and it matches very well with the skills that I have learned during my work in the xxx office.

As my resume indicates, I have been working as a Senior Underwriting Associate in Operations Department in Corporate Solutions. In different line of business, I have supported underwriters with tasks like submissions entries in various internal systems, generation of policies, invoices as well as the maintenance of existing contracts and broad knowledge of wordings. Additionally, I was involved not only with underwriters and brokers, but also with internal departments like Technical Accounting, Data Quality Team and more who are responsible for proper processing in our systems. Furthermore, I have participated in numerous small project which resolved in changes of processes and analyzing business drivers.

The position as Underwriting Associate gave me a great opportunity to gain work experience after my apprenticeship. Moreover, I was able to develop my potential in the given role, knowledge about the company and interact with different departments. In this period, I acquired a huge insight into the field of administration and a good understanding how to connect dots and provide good administrative support.

In addition to the experience, I have obtained in a similar job environment; I can also offer independent and efficient operation skills as well as strong communication skills and ability to maintain working relations with diverse people. Beyond that, I am able to work efficiently in a fast-paced environment and to make necessary adjustment to meet deadline. I think that my ability to adapt to changes and work effectively under pressure makes me a valuable asset to the team.

Thank you for considering my application and I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours Sincerely,