I would like to sent a cover letter to one company in Italy in english and would be grateful if you have a look and check any mistakes I'm sure I made. I tried to write it no longer than one page and to answer their requirements which was: - good knowledge in Autocad, Rhino and Photoshop is required. - highly motivated and responsible interns to work for a period of 6/9 months on international projects, on competitions, design and in the model workshop.
This is the letter:
W******, 19th January 2011 A**** ******a (address) (tel) (mail)
I am writing to introduce myself and to inquire about an opportunity to gain a practical experience at your company according to S**********s internship position.
I am architect from P*****, recently graduated with a master degree in Architecture and Town Planning from the Technical University of L*****, P***** I am very motivated to have an opportunity to work on international projects and competitions and this is one of the reason I would like to have a chance of obtaining an internship at your company.
My background additionally includes previous trainings. Last summer I was working as an intern according to IAESTE exchange program at ‘R********’, architecture office in P******, México and during this period I had an opportunity to increase my knowledge of the international architecture, designing, preparing technical drawings and making 3D models and renderings of the current projects and I would like to develop my experience also in this field. In 2010 I was working in a construction office ´N************ Inc.´ in New York, USA and before that I spent one year studying at the Technical University of Valencia in Spain according to student exchange program LLP Erasmus, where I had a chance of taking part in a sculpture and model production workshop and I am very eager to develop my knowledge also in this domains.
I easily learn new things and I am open to new challenges. I am a creative, conscientious and willing to work person who can easily communicate with others either in English or Spanish. I can work efficiently both in a team and individually.
I believe my educational background and my experience make me well suited to the position of a trainee at your company and would be grateful if you would consider my application. My enclosed CV provides additional details about my background. To see samples of my work please take a look at my online portfolio: http://**************/
If you would need any additional information, do not hesitate to contact me and I will be pleased to provide them.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
A************a
I know that there should also be a paragraph where I should emphasize my availability and I wonder if I should add some information like: highly skilled in AutoCad, Photoshop and 3ds Max because I already have it in my CV and it would make my letter too long.
Please give me some advice, I will be very very grateful!! and hope it help to others
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