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Pravinvenkatesh Posted 14 years ago
Letter Writing
Cover letter - suggestions of improvement???
Dear Sir,
This is in intent of applying for an internship in your firm from February 2012 till July 2012. I’m currently pursuing my final project semester of Master of Science in Software Engineering at Technology College. I’ve specifically showed interests in areas of information technologies such as data structures and data mining through my college course work. The way in which raw or meaningless data set is processed through several levels of learning methods is simply astounding for me. Besides my main line i have also developed enterprise based applications and widgets for my college and a company by the name Some Technologies during my previous project semester.
This internship would provide me with opportunities to engage with the problem in hand and not only to gain a learning curve through the process but also to get productive and sustainable results.
Thank you,
This is in intent of applying for an internship in your firm from February 2012 till July 2012. I’m currently pursuing my final project semester of Master of Science in Software Engineering at Technology College. I’ve specifically showed interests in areas of information technologies such as data structures and data mining through my college course work. The way in which raw or meaningless data set is processed through several levels of learning methods is simply astounding for me. Besides my main line i have also developed enterprise based applications and widgets for my college and a company by the name Some Technologies during my previous project semester.
This internship would provide me with opportunities to engage with the problem in hand and not only to gain a learning curve through the process but also to get productive and sustainable results.
Thank you,
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Hi Only a comma was essential. This is in intent of applying for an internship in your firm from February 2012 till July 2012. I’m currently pursuing my final project semester of Master of Science in Software Engineering at Technology College.
- Hi Only a comma was essential.
- This is in intent of applying for an internship in your firm from February 2012 till July 2012.
- I’m currently pursuing my final project semester of Master of Science in Software Engineering at Technology College.
- I’ve specifically showed interests in areas of information technologies such as data structures and data mining through my college course work.
- The way in which raw or meaningless data set is processed through several levels of learning methods is simply astounding for me.
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Hi
Only a comma was essential.
This is in intent of applying for an internship in your firm from February 2012 till July 2012. I’m currently pursuing my final project semester of Master of Science in Software Engineering at Technology College. I’ve specifically showed interests in areas of information technologies such as data structures and data mining through my college course
Only a comma was essential.
This is in intent of applying for an internship in your firm from February 2012 till July 2012. I’m currently pursuing my final project semester of Master of Science in Software Engineering at Technology College. I’ve specifically showed interests in areas of information technologies such as data structures and data mining through my college course
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