Cover letter-Please edit and give me feedback. Thank you.

Here are my two cover letters that I am using to apply for jobs. They are simple languages and straightforward, so please edit them and tell me if I need to change anything. I appreciate it. Thank you.

Dear Attc recruiter,

I would like to apply for the Junior Laboratory Scientist position since I have found this position will be a great opportunity for me to exercise my developed skills and knowledge through my undergraduate and graduate trainings. I am highly motivated and hard-working to achieve goals and meet deadlines. My ability to analyze data and solve problems is a strong assess that has allowed me to conduct experiments smoothly. In addition, I am familiar and have varied experience in molecular biology, such as PCR, SDS-PAGE, and DNA and protein purification. I am excited to take on complex projects and to learn diverse skills that this position encompasses. This position is definitely a great fit for me and will challenge me to dive into genomic analysis and explore the underlying mechanisms of neurogenesis.

All personal information and skills are detailed on my resume. If you see me as a potential candidate, please contact me via email or phone.

Regards,

Thi.

Dear PPD recuiter,

I am writing to express my interest in Laboratory Specialist position since it aligns with my interest and my existing knowledge. Through the basic and advanced biological courses, I became fascinated by the immune system. I found it one of the systems that are complicated and play many key roles and can lead to serious diseases. I possess strong skills in molecular biology such as PCR, protein expression and purification, and measurement of enzyme kinetics using fluorescence. I am proficient in conducting literature research and troubleshooting experiments. I hope this position will further my training with new cellular techniques and challenge me to dive deeper into the role of the immune system in diseases. Moreover, I enjoy collaborating with others so we can build on each other’s idea and together we can achieve the goal on time. I hope this opportunity will improve my professionalism and advance me in my future career.

Attached is my resume with all details about my education and work experience. If you consider me as a potential candidate, please reach out via phone or email. I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Best regards,

Thi.