Cover Letter. Need you help plz

hi,

i hope that you are all doing fine.

I could need your help.

It would be nice if you could read and check my cover letter.

thx.

Dear Sir or Madam:

Since October 2004 I have been studying _ and _ at the University of _. At present, I am in my 4^th semester. I expect to complete my Bachelor of Arts degree by June 2008.

Because I study _ and because I am very interested in working in the media, I was always looking for an opportunity to do an internship in the media and preferably in the USA. I was very happy when I found the opportunity that is offered by the ----------------------and --------------.

As my resumé indicates, I am very interested in music and the radio. On a practical level I have gained experience by working my university radio station. I have learned to work in a team and to make decisions as a team. (please help me with this phrase.)

During my placement abroad I would like to work in the live media. I am very interested in this area of work and I would like to plan my career in this field.

Enclosed you will find my resumé and my letter of motivation for your consideration. I would appreciate the opportunity of doing an internship in Washington D.C. for 16 weeks during the period from 1^st October 2006 to the end of January 2007.

Should you require any further information, please contact me at the above address. I would be glad to supply this information as soon as possible.

I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours faithfully