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Rimel Posted 18 years ago
Letter Writing
Cover Letter- I need some help, please
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00 I am currently looking for a new position in finance as I have been laid off quite recently due to the financial crisis. 02 br
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00 I have already sent some applications but I am affraid some parts of my cover letter may be a bit rubbish. 02 br
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00 I would really appreciate if you could help me to be sure that what I send to potential employers is "perfect english"! 02 br
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01 b 00 I have a comprehensive professional experience, during which I have had exposure to various financial products / investment strategies as an asset manager or a risk controller. I have developed an extensive knowledge of financial markets and most asset classes. Specialized in equity markets and arbitrages, I have also acquired strong technical skills in different fields such as funds allocation and derivatives. The position you want to fulfil is for me a unique occasion to synthesize my previous experience and take part in an ambitious global and large-scale project. I am an analytical, proactive and committed team player who can work autonomously. 02 b 00 0-
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00 I am currently looking for a new position in finance as I have been laid off quite recently due to the financial crisis. 02 br
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00 I have already sent some applications but I am affraid some parts of my cover letter may be a bit rubbish. 02 br
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00 I would really appreciate if you could help me to be sure that what I send to potential employers is "perfect english"! 02 br
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00 Many thanks 02 br
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00 Below is the text I'd like you to check : 02 br
01 b 00 I have a comprehensive professional experience, during which I have had exposure to various financial products / investment strategies as an asset manager or a risk controller. I have developed an extensive knowledge of financial markets and most asset classes. Specialized in equity markets and arbitrages, I have also acquired strong technical skills in different fields such as funds allocation and derivatives. The position you want to fulfil is for me a unique occasion to synthesize my previous experience and take part in an ambitious global and large-scale project. I am an analytical, proactive and committed team player who can work autonomously. 02 b 00 0-
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0 I am looking forward to your case but I cant understand financial field more 0-
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0 I am looking forward to your case but I cant understand financial field more 0-
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0 Thanks for trying anyway, that's very kind. 02 br
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00 Financial concepts apart, do you think the wording of my letter is correct? 0-
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00 Financial concepts apart, do you think the wording of my letter is correct? 0-
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0 Can someone please have a look to my letter. Can swap french if you need. 02 br
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0 Dear Mister Micawber, 02 br
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00 As I saw you were a forum guru, kindly responding to some request here, I personnally ask for your help. I actually need someone to correct some part of my cover letter as I am looking for a new job. I would really appreciate if you could help me. 02 br
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01 b 00 "I have a
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00 As I saw you were a forum guru, kindly responding to some request here, I personnally ask for your help. I actually need someone to correct some part of my cover letter as I am looking for a new job. I would really appreciate if you could help me. 02 br
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00 many thanks 02 br
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