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Hi,

I could use your opinion/constructive criticism before finally submitting the following letter:

Dear Dr xxx

With the current statement, I would like to express my strong interest for the PhD project titled: “xxxxxx”, that is currently available as part of your research group.

Acknowledging the highly regarded status of the Centre for xxxxx Engineering, and the xxxxx department in particular, was one of the paramount reasons to apply for this particular project. The scope of this project aligns with my personal aspirations to further specialize in the field of Biotechnology, while also acquiring a more industrially oriented outlook.

Through my background in Biosciences, I am well aware of the complexity of the biological systems down to the “single-cell level” that sets the cornerstone of the contemporary Biopharmaceutical industry. Additionally, through my Master’s degree in Chemical Engineering and Biotechnology, I have gained significant insight regarding the challenges encountered, either upstream or downstream, during the development of novel Biopharmaceutical products.

Through the various projects I have been involved in, I have obtained substantial hands-on experience in a variety of molecular biology techniques, with specialization in biotechnological applications. In my latest assignment as a Product Development scientist in the Pharmaceutical industry, I have personally experienced the challenges of working in a GMP regulated environment, and have gained significant experience in aspects of process design and implementation.

The fast advancing field of the Biotechnology represents to me the pinnacle of innovation and excellence, thus joining the research activities of your department would provide a significant intellectual stimulus as well as a solid science-based foundation in the field of Bioprocessing. On my behalf, through my wide academic background and professional outlook, I believe I possess the meticulous technical skills, strong determination, and underlying ambition to be considered a good candidate for this specific project. By carrying over the same enthusiasm I am willing to go the “extra mile” in order to align with your exceptionally high standards and make the most out of this opportunity.

I would cherish the opportunity to have a further discussion with you, regarding the possibility of enrolling to your programme. Thank you in advance for your time and consideration.

Best Regards,
T.K.