Cover letter for my CV

Could someone check out my covering letter and say if it was ok? I have already sent it to the University, just a small feedback would be highly appreciated. Thank you.



Savvy



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( my address )



(address of the University I applied to)



Aug. 18, 05



Dear Sir,



I wish to apply as a Transfer Undergraduate in Cell Biology/Neuroscience in your esteemed University.I have completed a three year Bachelor degree (Biochemistry) in with distinction anda GPA of 3.82.



In my three years of Biochemistry, my most exciting periods were during the Anatomy & Physiology sessions where I thoroughly enjoyed discovering the complex yet perfectly engineered system of the brain. Additionally, I secured 85/100 in the University examination for Cell biology. After completing my Bachelors course, I continued working in our family business whereby I constantly interacted with our employees on their health & psychological issues. The combination of my courses in Biochemistry along with consultation kindled my interest in pursuing something that would combine the two- Cell Biology/Neuroscience.



I decided to choose because American Universities impart unparalleled opportunity

to transgress the tenets of science & help students scale new heights.

I browsed extensively through several Universities and found your University has a milieu replete with strong & versatile academic programs in the field of Neuroscience, the environment which would give me unbridled freedom to explore new ventures in the interesting field of Neuroscience.



At this juncture, I assure you Sir that you will find a dedicated, hard-working and capable individual in me. I am confident that your institution will be able to satiate my thirst in this eminent field.



Please find my Curriculum Vitae enclosed herewith for your reference.

I eagerly look forward to hearing from you.



Yours truly,

(my name)