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Leplusfort Posted 11 years ago
Letter Writing

Cover Letter for an internship abroad

Dear All,

I need to apply for an internship abroad. I started my cover letter but could you revise my cover letter ?
Dear Madame, Dear Sir,

I am currently studying in the first year of a Master at "name of my school/university". I am looking for an internship inside a financial department in a multinational company, as "name of the company" is, for a period of six months from January 2016. I would like to contribute to the financial development and sustainability of "name of the company".

I have a Bachelor’s degree in Economics and Finance from the "name of my school/university", in which I also had financial analysis and accounting as a part of my curriculum. I "name of my school/university" in September and I am learning corporate finance and strategies. I chose this school because of its reputation in finance and its corporate finance program.

I have a strong interest for figures and it brings me the curiosity in order to analyse my environment. I would like to join the next year the corporate finance program inside my school that is why I purpose you my services. Passionate by cooking, and especially baking, I am in the habit of using "name of the company"’s products because they always satisfy my friends. Moreover, I would like to progress in a worldwide environment and your company meets this expectation.

Enclosed is a copy of my resume, which provides more details about my qualifications for the position.

I look forward to meeting you. Thank you for taking the time to consider this application and I look forward to hearing from you in the near future. Thank you, in advance, for your consideration.
I thank you in advance for your reply.
  

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Dear Madame, Dear Sir, Dear Sir/Madam, I am currently studying in the first year of a Master a first-year master's student at " name of my school/university ", and I am looking would like to apply for an internship inside a with the financial department in a multinational company, as " name of the company " is , for a period of six months from starting in Januar y, 2016. I would like to contribute to the financial development and sustainability of " name of the company ". I have a b achelor’s degree in Economics and Finance from the " name of my school/university ", in which I also had financial analysis and accounting as a part of my curriculum.

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  • Dear Madame, Dear Sir, Dear Sir/Madam, I am currently studying in the first year of a Master a first-year master's student at " name of my school/university ", and I am looking would like to apply for an internship inside a with the financial department in a multinational company, as " name of the company " is , for a period of six months from starting in Januar y, 2016.
  • I would like to contribute to the financial development and sustainability of " name of the company ".
  • I have a b achelor’s degree in Economics and Finance from the " name of my school/university ", in which I also had financial analysis and accounting as a part of my curriculum.
  • I " name of my school/university " started my master's studies at XYZ in Septembe r, and I am learning corporate finance and strategies.
  • I chose this school because of its reputation in finance and its highly regarded corporate finance program.
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Dear Madame, Dear Sir,

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am currently studying in the first year of a Master a first-year master's student at "name of my school/university", and I am looking would like to apply for an internship inside a with the financial department in a multinational company, as
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Thank your for your reply. I added a new sentence in your correction but could you check it ? Thank you in advance for your reply.
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am a first-year master’s student at "name of my school/university", and I would like to apply for an internship with the financial department in "name of the company" for a period of six months starting in J
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No, your new sentence doesn't make it better.
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Ok thank you for your reply. But do you think I can add something in order to improve my cover letter ?
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