Cover letter for a phd postion

Hello,

I find this forum very useful for non-native englisch speakers and would like to thank each and everyone personally for this nice work.

I request you to correct my cover letter and would welcome any suggestions for improvisation..

Dear Prof. XX,



Sub:- Statement of motivation for a PhD position at the Institute of Metal Forming



I wanted to be a part of an industry that was an important part of every other business; this is why I wanted to be a part of the manufacturing industry. From Information technology to pharmaceutical sciences, manufacturing was a prominent part of business. This is exactly the reason why I chose to get a Bachelor of Engineering in Production Engineering at .


Through my bachelors, I was able to learn different key aspects of production through subjects like Manufacturing Engineering, Production Management, Total Quality Management, Industrial automation, Robotics and so on.



My decision to pursue master studies from YYY is supported by my wish to be part of an excellent academic institution. YYY supplies me with research groups in production engineering with good reputation, and I offer my knowledge, creativity, enthusiasm and all my talents for research in science topics.



As student of Masters in Production Engineering at YYY, one of country's elite university; it has been my great fortune to work among a team of engineering teachers to make research projects in the field of “manufacturing”. I even studied Engineering Economics to understand projects from a financial perspective.


Though my master’s degree has given me a lot of information regarding project management and manufacturing, the opportunity to work and use my skills since three good years as Project Engineer at companyXXX in the “division U” was the stepping stone to apply my knowledge in vast fields of Production Engineering from design phase and real-time production issues to the phase of after supply services for the customer. Although working in state of art technical environment the hunger for more was never declining. Which is why, I decided to use my creativity and problem solving techniques to develop new techniques which would contribute the future generations a better life. Through my research, I would like to reinstate the importance of cold and as well as hot Y techniques.

I truly enjoyed my time being at the university as a bachelor’s student at XXX and as a master’s student at YYY and would love to come back to “ZZZ” for a doctorate degree. I have found that ZZZ is one of the topmost universities in the world, particularly in the manufacturing engineering field. However, what makes me to choose it to follow my education in is its great network labs with its up-to-date research facilities and the diverse but profound courses presented in the curriculum. Moreover, I have seen the research reports of “UUU” and have found my objectives in accordance with interests of the faculties, in various Projects from AAA, BBB, CCC & DDD.



One last attracting point about ZZZ is the cultural diversity of the students, making it a natural choice for someone who was not born in EEE. Please allow me take this opportunity to let you know that I gain good reading, writing and speaking skills in Native Language as well. In conclusion, I do hope that I'II be given a chance to realize my objectives by being granted an admission. And I look forward for a long and mutually beneficial relationship with the University.



With Best Regards,



V