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Cover Letter correction
Hi everyone ! I am looking for someone to correct my cover letter :
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a first-year student in the INSA Rennes (French engineering school) and I am looking for an internship in an advertising agency of London. I have learned that you offer four-weeks job experiences in your Account Management department and I am writing to apply to it and to work with you in June 2016.
I have always been interested in advertising, communication and design, that’s why I learned by myself how to use professionals designing softwares, and I have worked as a volunteer in a few associations such as “Festival Undessens” where I am actually DTP.
This internship is very important for me because it would help me to increase significantly my English level and to discover the professional world, that’s why I’m really motivated. Also, I would like to complete my engineer training with a commerce degree and this work experience is the best way for me to know more about business.
Please find more details about my experiences and my abilities in the attached resume. I thank you in advance for reading it.
Best regards,
XX
Thank's !
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a first-year student in the INSA Rennes (French engineering school) and I am looking for an internship in an advertising agency of London. I have learned that you offer four-weeks job experiences in your Account Management department and I am writing to apply to it and to work with you in June 2016.
I have always been interested in advertising, communication and design, that’s why I learned by myself how to use professionals designing softwares, and I have worked as a volunteer in a few associations such as “Festival Undessens” where I am actually DTP.
This internship is very important for me because it would help me to increase significantly my English level and to discover the professional world, that’s why I’m really motivated. Also, I would like to complete my engineer training with a commerce degree and this work experience is the best way for me to know more about business.
Please find more details about my experiences and my abilities in the attached resume. I thank you in advance for reading it.
Best regards,
XX
Thank's !
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Dear Sir or Madam, I am a first-year student in the INSA Rennes (French engineering school) and I am looking for an internship in a London advertising agency of London . I have learned that you offer four- week job experiences in your Account Management department and I am writing to apply for it and to work with you in June 2016. I have always been interested in advertising, communication and design, (comma splice) that’s why I learned by myself how to use professionals designing softwares , and I have worked as a volunteer in a few associations such as “Festival Undessens” where I am actually DTP (spell out the acronym) .
- Dear Sir or Madam, I am a first-year student in the INSA Rennes (French engineering school) and I am looking for an internship in a London advertising agency of London .
- I have learned that you offer four- week job experiences in your Account Management department and I am writing to apply for it and to work with you in June 2016.
- I have always been interested in advertising, communication and design, (comma splice) that’s why I learned by myself how to use professionals designing softwares , and I have worked as a volunteer in a few associations such as “Festival Undessens” where I am actually DTP (spell out the acronym) .
- This internship is very important for me because it would help me to increase significantly my English proficiency and to discover the professional world, (comma splice) that’s why I’m really motivated.
- Also, I would like to complete my engineer ing training with a commerce degree and this work experience is the best way for me to know more about business.
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a first-year student in the INSA Rennes (French engineering school) and I am looking for an internship in a London advertising agency of London. I have learned that you offer four-week job experiences in your Account Management department and I am writing to apply for it and to work with you in June 2016.
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I am a first-year student in the INSA Rennes (French engineering school) and I am looking for an internship in a London advertising agency
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