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Florian Posted 17 years ago
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Cover Letter correction
Please could anyone check briefly my cover letter and propose some corrections???
Thanks in advance....
Dear Sir or Madam
With this letter I want to express my interest in doing an internship at ***
Trough my current work as an intern at ***, a leading ** economic research and consultancy institute, I got in touch with your products and your work, which caught immediately my attention.
In October 2008, I graduated with a Bachelor of Science in Economics from the . Before I will continue my educational path at university with a Master program in Economics next September, I would like to gain practical experiences in the field of economic research and bring in my theoretical knowledge into daily business. As my current internship will end in March 2009, I would like to take the challenge in doing an internship abroad.
I’m considering myself a very open minded person, with a lot of motivation and curiosity. I’m very much used to work systematically and accurately. I like to work independently as I appreciate the work in a team. Trough my courses at university, as through my working experience I have a very good knowledge of statistics and econometrics, data research and analysis and editorial skills. Besides German, my mother tongue, I’m proficient in English an French, both written and oral, and I have basic knowledge in Italian. To improve my Italian, I’m planning to complete a one month intensive language course in , before starting with the internship.
I hope you have an open position for a young motivated and ambitious person as an intern, preferably starting from April or Mai, for a duration of three month. Attached you will find my CV and my transcripts from the .
I hope to hear from you soon
Sincerely
Thanks in advance....
Dear Sir or Madam
With this letter I want to express my interest in doing an internship at ***
Trough my current work as an intern at ***, a leading ** economic research and consultancy institute, I got in touch with your products and your work, which caught immediately my attention.
In October 2008, I graduated with a Bachelor of Science in Economics from the . Before I will continue my educational path at university with a Master program in Economics next September, I would like to gain practical experiences in the field of economic research and bring in my theoretical knowledge into daily business. As my current internship will end in March 2009, I would like to take the challenge in doing an internship abroad.
I’m considering myself a very open minded person, with a lot of motivation and curiosity. I’m very much used to work systematically and accurately. I like to work independently as I appreciate the work in a team. Trough my courses at university, as through my working experience I have a very good knowledge of statistics and econometrics, data research and analysis and editorial skills. Besides German, my mother tongue, I’m proficient in English an French, both written and oral, and I have basic knowledge in Italian. To improve my Italian, I’m planning to complete a one month intensive language course in , before starting with the internship.
I hope you have an open position for a young motivated and ambitious person as an intern, preferably starting from April or Mai, for a duration of three month. Attached you will find my CV and my transcripts from the .
I hope to hear from you soon
Sincerely
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Hey bud, I made all the necessary changes. I underlined the mistakes and typed in the correct way so you can see what your mistakes were and you can improve that. Hope to have helped you, good luck.
- Hey bud, I made all the necessary changes.
- I underlined the mistakes and typed in the correct way so you can see what your mistakes were and you can improve that.
- Hope to have helped you, good luck.
- Dear Sir or Madam With this letter I want to express my interest in doing an internship at *** Trough my current work as an intern at ***, a leading ** economic research and consultancy institute, I got in touch with your products and your work, which caught immediately my attention.
- which immediately caught my attention.
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Hey bud, I made all the necessary changes. I underlined the mistakes and typed in the correct way so you can see what your mistakes were and you can improve that. Hope to have helped you, good luck.
Dear Sir or Madam
With this letter I want to express my interest in doing an internship at ***
Trough my current work as an intern at ***, a leading ** economic research and
Dear Sir or Madam
With this letter I want to express my interest in doing an internship at ***
Trough my current work as an intern at ***, a leading ** economic research and
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