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Mr1sparkle Posted 17 years ago
Letter Writing
Cover letter - check any mistakes for me plz
the CV solely aiming toward for position in sales, and customer services. I will be applying for Bilingual Accounts Receivable Consultant in Rogers
any grammar or run on error?
CV too long?
Am i emphaising my topics and points correctly?
thanks in advance really appreciated
The open position notice for CSR rep is an accurate match between your job requirements and my qualifications. Adopting the personality of an extrovert, a position consists of interacting with variety of people of different background and to assist those in needs intrigues me to apply. This is an opportunity to utilize my attributes into contributing to the overall mission of the company. I am a highly motivated and enthusiastic college student with a good knowledge of the company’s products and services and shall enhance it in providing customer focused services.
Able to use own initiative and work under pressure to meet challenging deadlines / objectives which have contributed to my progress and success. First class communication and interpersonal skills with the addition of fluency in Cantonese enables the skill with the will and determination needed to succeed. Excellent exposure in the field of customer servicing and easily adapt into a sophisticated environment within short period of time. Furthermore, I am Computer literate greatly in Internet Explorer, Microsoft Word and Excel. Through my experience from past employers, I have established self confidence, self disciplinary and strong work ethic to maintain efficiency in my performances. Previous employment experiences are from well known companies includes Ramada Hotel, Subway, and Ye Hong retirement center.
I’ve devoted strong interest in learning toward this industry and am highly anticipated of working in an environment encompassed of challenges and opportunities ahead. An opportunity to further discuss the attributes you are seeking in an employee to fill this position would be greatly appreciated. My daily schedules are always organized and flexible, therefore you may reach me for an interview at any given time. Thank you in advance for your consideration.
any grammar or run on error?
CV too long?
Am i emphaising my topics and points correctly?
thanks in advance really appreciated
The open position notice for CSR rep is an accurate match between your job requirements and my qualifications. Adopting the personality of an extrovert, a position consists of interacting with variety of people of different background and to assist those in needs intrigues me to apply. This is an opportunity to utilize my attributes into contributing to the overall mission of the company. I am a highly motivated and enthusiastic college student with a good knowledge of the company’s products and services and shall enhance it in providing customer focused services.
Able to use own initiative and work under pressure to meet challenging deadlines / objectives which have contributed to my progress and success. First class communication and interpersonal skills with the addition of fluency in Cantonese enables the skill with the will and determination needed to succeed. Excellent exposure in the field of customer servicing and easily adapt into a sophisticated environment within short period of time. Furthermore, I am Computer literate greatly in Internet Explorer, Microsoft Word and Excel. Through my experience from past employers, I have established self confidence, self disciplinary and strong work ethic to maintain efficiency in my performances. Previous employment experiences are from well known companies includes Ramada Hotel, Subway, and Ye Hong retirement center.
I’ve devoted strong interest in learning toward this industry and am highly anticipated of working in an environment encompassed of challenges and opportunities ahead. An opportunity to further discuss the attributes you are seeking in an employee to fill this position would be greatly appreciated. My daily schedules are always organized and flexible, therefore you may reach me for an interview at any given time. Thank you in advance for your consideration.
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Try: I am qualified for the job of a CSR representative. I enjoy interacting with various people from different background, and I love to assist those in need. This job position is an opportunity for me to contribute to the overall mission of the company.
- Try: I am qualified for the job of a CSR representative.
- I enjoy interacting with various people from different background, and I love to assist those in need.
- This job position is an opportunity for me to contribute to the overall mission of the company.
- I am motivated and enthusiastic with a good knowledge of your company’s products and services, and I can enhance your company's image by providing customer-focused services.
- I am initiative and can work under pressure to meet challenging deadlines or objectives.
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Try:
I am qualified for the job of a CSR representative. I enjoy interacting with various people from different background, and I love to assist those in need. This job position is an opportunity for me to contribute to the overall mission of the company. I am motivated and enthusiastic with a good knowledge of your company’s products and services, and I can enhance your company's image by pro
I am qualified for the job of a CSR representative. I enjoy interacting with various people from different background, and I love to assist those in need. This job position is an opportunity for me to contribute to the overall mission of the company. I am motivated and enthusiastic with a good knowledge of your company’s products and services, and I can enhance your company's image by pro
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