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Anonymous Posted 7 years ago
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Cover letter

Can anyone help me correct the errors in my cover letter?

Im writing this to express my unyielding passion towards the job application that I saw advertised online on your website.

Having finished a bachelor's degree of Information and technology, I can confidentally say that I am flexible with any kind of task that will be given to me, should I be accepted, I have some experience with fixing computer problems ranging from minor to worst, and I think that I have met the qualifications of what was stated on your website.

Sincerely,
My name

Thanks in advance!

  

Top answer

Don't use 'unyielding passion towards' – that's well over the top. Write something like 'my great interest in'.

  • Don't use 'unyielding passion towards' – that's well over the top.
  • Write something like 'my great interest in'.
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Don't use 'unyielding passion towards' – that's well over the top.

Write something like 'my great interest in'.

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