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ALL13 Posted 10 years ago
Letter Writing

Cover letter

Good afternoon,

could someone please check the first paragraph of my cover letter for a trainee position?

"Having studied and worked in many different countries and also gained valuable experience in a variety of areas such as Consulting and Finance, a Trainee position in an internationally oriented environment at ABC is very appealing to me. I enjoy working on challenging projects, and would like to take the chance to gain an overview of your different business areas and to establish a group-wide network within ABC that opens up global opportunities."

Thank you very much in advance!
  

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ALL13 and would like to take the chance to gain an overview of your different business areas Do you mean that the trainee position will give you exposure to various departments in that organization? ALL13 to establish a group-wide network within ABC that opens up global opportunities What does that mean?

  • ALL13 and would like to take the chance to gain an overview of your different business areas Do you mean that the trainee position will give you exposure to various departments in that organization?
  • ALL13 to establish a group-wide network within ABC that opens up global opportunities What does that mean?
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ALL13and would like to take the chance to gain an overview of your different business areas
Do you mean that the trainee position will give you exposure to various departments in that organization?
ALL13to establish a group-wide network within ABC that opens up global opportunities
What does that mean?
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teechrALL13and would like to take the chance to gain an overview of your different business areasDo you mean that the trainee position will give you exposure to various departments in that organization?
Exactly - as you will be working within different departments during the program
teechrALL13to establish a group-wide network within AB
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Having studied and worked in many different countries, and also having gained valuable experience in a variety of areas such as consulting and finance, I find the Trainee position, in an internationally oriented environment, at ABC is very appealing. to me. I enjoy working on challenging projects, and would
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Thank you!

I gave it another try - less self-oriented. Would you mind to have another look at it?

"My intercultural experience and multilingualism gained while studying and working in different countries combined with my strong analytical skills acquired during my (work) experiences in consulting and finance, are relevant qualifications that I would like to contribute to ABC.
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No, I don't like it. Stick with the previous one.

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