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ERLT Posted 11 years ago
Letter Writing
Cover letter
Dear all,
Would you mind correcting my cover letter especially concerning tenses. " I have had the chance to experience" as I want to demonstrate that my previous experienced can make me get the job, or " i had the chance" .
Dear Ms xxxxx,
Thanks to billion dollars investment in xxxx, the xxxxxxxxxxx is focused on preventing risks for investors by giving some consultancy on long-term infrastructure planning. Highly motivated to contribute to xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx, I apply for the above mentioned position.
Indeed, my professional background allowed me to work in various sectors which enable me to have a global awareness on projects from a commercial and resources management point of view.
First employed as Document Controller on xxxxx businesses within xxxxxxxxxxxxxx Unit – I have had the chance to experience and actively participate to engineering project management. Shortly thereafter, I evolved on a more administrative role contributing to Bid submissions.
My missions in export logistic or as an executive assistant are also assets to better understand and support your team. Therefore, please find enclosed my resume in French and the detailed version in English to download on xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx.
I thank for the attention you pay to my candidature,
Yours sincerely,
Would you mind correcting my cover letter especially concerning tenses. " I have had the chance to experience" as I want to demonstrate that my previous experienced can make me get the job, or " i had the chance" .
Dear Ms xxxxx,
Thanks to billion dollars investment in xxxx, the xxxxxxxxxxx is focused on preventing risks for investors by giving some consultancy on long-term infrastructure planning. Highly motivated to contribute to xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx, I apply for the above mentioned position.
Indeed, my professional background allowed me to work in various sectors which enable me to have a global awareness on projects from a commercial and resources management point of view.
First employed as Document Controller on xxxxx businesses within xxxxxxxxxxxxxx Unit – I have had the chance to experience and actively participate to engineering project management. Shortly thereafter, I evolved on a more administrative role contributing to Bid submissions.
My missions in export logistic or as an executive assistant are also assets to better understand and support your team. Therefore, please find enclosed my resume in French and the detailed version in English to download on xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx.
I thank for the attention you pay to my candidature,
Yours sincerely,
Top answer
Thanks to billion dollars investment in xxxx, the xxxxxxxxxxx is focused on preventing risks for investors by giving some consultancy on long-term infrastructure planning. (The previous sentence makes no sense to me. ) Highly motivated to contribute to xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx, I apply for the above mentioned position.
- Thanks to billion dollars investment in xxxx, the xxxxxxxxxxx is focused on preventing risks for investors by giving some consultancy on long-term infrastructure planning.
- (The previous sentence makes no sense to me.
- ) Highly motivated to contribute to xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx, I apply for the above mentioned position.
- ) Indeed, my professional background allowed me to work in various sectors ( Various sectors is very ambiguous.
- ) which enable me to have a global awareness ( Awareness is very weak.
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Thanks to billion dollars investment in xxxx, the xxxxxxxxxxx is focused on preventing risks for investors by giving some consultancy on long-term infrastructure planning. (The previous sentence makes no sense to me. Is the job position for a financial analyst or a computer security expert?)
Highly motivated to contribute to xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx, I apply for the above mentioned position.
Highly motivated to contribute to xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx, I apply for the above mentioned position.
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