0
Noona30 Posted 11 years ago
Letter Writing

Cover letter

Hi all, I want to submit my cover letter as soon as possible for a job opening and I appreciate it if anyone can read it and give any comment or editings. as english is not my mother language. I am sorry it is a bit long but I hope I don't have many mistakes. THANK YOU!

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to express my strong desire to be considered for the XX position being advertised on XX website. My interest in your company comes from the focus of your company on delivering high quality services to major clients.

My record of academic achievements and professional career history demonstrates attributes that make me a valuable employee for this position who can make great contributions to encourage the growth of your business. I look forward to a long and productive career in recruiting. As a young woman with diverse interests and a good communicator; I feel that I have the practical skills needed to fill the position.

I have successfully completed an MBA degree at XX University, United Kingdom. My commitment to learning and succeeding helped me achieve high academic results. Good organisational skills enabled me to meet academic timelines, in both group based projects and independent assignments. Involvement in campus activities such as being the XX Society Secretary of XX University and Senior Course Representative further developed my leadership skills and abilities to communicate confidently in groups and have input to the achievement of team goals. My competence in HR management can be portrayed by my excellent performance in Human Resource Management module as I achieved a high score of 79 (distinction).

I have excellent time management skills with the ability to meet the requirements of this position. I have outstanding decision-making skills. And with my excellent communication skills I have the ability to communicate with employees, clients and executives, and maintain excellent working relationships.

I am keen to work for a company like yours which not only offers great career opportunities and a competitive salary but more importantly gives me the chance to be part of something really special, This role is an opportunity for me to use my talent and skills to accomplish my goals of becoming a productive and successful person in the world of business with one of the world’s leading recruitment companies.

My resume has been uploaded, per your instructions, which further details my experience, achievements and qualifications.
I look forward in much anticipation to hearing from you.

Sincerely,
  

Top answer

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to express my strong desire to be considered for the XX position being advertised on the XX website. My interest in your company comes from the focus of your company on delivering high quality services to major clients. I believe that m y record of academic achievements and professional career history demonstrates attributes that would make me a suitable candidate for this position and hopefully a valuable employee who can make great contributions to promote the growth of your business.

  • Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to express my strong desire to be considered for the XX position being advertised on the XX website.
  • My interest in your company comes from the focus of your company on delivering high quality services to major clients.
  • I believe that m y record of academic achievements and professional career history demonstrates attributes that would make me a suitable candidate for this position and hopefully a valuable employee who can make great contributions to promote the growth of your business.
  • I look forward to a long and productive career in recruiting.
  • As a young woman with diverse interests and as a good communicator , I feel that I have the practical skills needed to fill the position.
Free · every Monday

Get the Weekly English Kit 📬

New words, one handy idiom, and a 2-minute quiz — delivered to your inbox to keep your streak alive.

2 Answers
0
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to express my strong desire to be considered for the XX position being advertised on the XX website. My interest in your company comes from the focus of your company on delivering high quality services to major clients.

I believe that my record of academic achievements and professional career history demonstrates attributes that would
0
Thank you, that was really helpful! and it looks much better now.

Related Questions