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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
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cover letter

can somebody check it.
dear sir/madam,
since i was in the Elementary School i am dreaming to be a Physicist
and discover the Universe secrets.
my Physics grade in the Higher School certificate prove that i love Physics.
all my Friends told me that Physics is very difficult but i told them ( were there is a will there is a way).
on the other hand : i have chosen Aachen,LMU and TUM Universities because these Universities as i searched on the Internet and my Friends told me are the best for studying Physics in Germany
my expectation of studying Physics in Germany Universities give me a big opportunity to make my dreams a reality and i am sure that Germany Universities will give me experiences for my future career.
i am applying for DAAD Scholarship
because of many reasons. as you know i am a xxxxx here in Germany and i fear that i can not join to the University next year.
after i have finished the School at 2012 i have tried to come to germany as a Student but the German Embassy rejected me.
i hope that i dont waste another year from my life and i wish that you award me your Scholarship.
on the other hand: the : the DAAD Scholarship is very comfortable for me because of the Financial support.
as a final point, i hope that you award me this Scholarship.

yours faithfully
  

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Anonymous: can somebody check it. dear sir/madam, since i was in the Elementary School i am dreaming to be a Physicist and discover the Universe secrets. my Physics grade in the Higher School certificate prove that i love Physics.

  • Anonymous: can somebody check it.
  • dear sir/madam, since i was in the Elementary School i am dreaming to be a Physicist and discover the Universe secrets.
  • my Physics grade in the Higher School certificate prove that i love Physics.
  • all my Friends told me that Physics is very difficult but i told them ( were there is a will there is a way).
  • on the other hand : i have chosen Aachen,LMU and TUM Universities because these Universities as i searched on the Internet and my Friends told me are the best for studying Physics in Germany my expectation of studying Physics in Germany Universities give me a big opportunity to make my dreams a reality and i am sure that Germany Universities will give me experiences for my future career.
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Anonymous:
can somebody check it.
dear sir/madam,
since i was in the Elementary School i am dreaming to be a Physicist
and discover the Universe secrets.
my Physics grade in the Higher School certificate prove that i love Physics.
all my Friends told me that Physics is very difficult but i told them ( were there is a will there is a way).
on the other hand : i have cho
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You need to learn (or apply) basic punctuation skills.

The word "I" is ALWAYS a capital letter. The letter "i" is not a proper word.
The first letter in a sentence is ALWAYS capital.
Common nouns and adjectives (financial, friend, school, universe, scholarship, physicist, high, elementary, etc.) are not capitalized.

If you send a letter with all these basic punct

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