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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
Letter Writing

Cover letter

I am writing my cover letter to apply for a job as receptionist in a big firma. Are these sentences correct?Do they sound really English?

I am sure I can be excellent in welcoming visitors and groups, ensuring high service and hosting quality, and providing visitors all the advise and information they need, because I like very much being helpful and efficient in my private life, and even more at work. I am both serious and loyal, but also ambitious in the right measure.
  

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I am sure I can be excellent in welcoming visitors and groups, ensuring high service and hospitality . And I will provide visitors all the advise and information they nee d, with an appreciable level of interest and enthusiasm because by nature I am helpful . Furthermore I think I posssess the sense of seriousness, loyalty, and ambition in the right measure .

  • I am sure I can be excellent in welcoming visitors and groups, ensuring high service and hospitality .
  • And I will provide visitors all the advise and information they nee d, with an appreciable level of interest and enthusiasm because by nature I am helpful .
  • Furthermore I think I posssess the sense of seriousness, loyalty, and ambition in the right measure .
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I am sure I can be excellent in welcoming visitors and groups, ensuring high service and hospitality. And I will provide visitors all the advise and information they need, with an appreciable level of interest and enthusiasm because by nature I am helpful. Furthermore I think I posssess the sense of seriousness, loyalty, and ambition in the right measure .

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