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Zuz Posted 16 years ago
Letter Writing

Cover letter

Dear All,

I would like to apply for a Event assistant job and approach few different companies. Could you please read my covering letter bellow and give me some suggestion how to improve it or on grammar matters.

Many thanks,

Dear Sir/Madam



I am writing to enquire about any event/production assistant work that may be available in your organisation.



As can be seen from my details I have a great deal of experience working in Events environment and I have enjoyed working in this environment and I would like to continue.



I have expertise and experience in successful event planning and administration. During my work as an event assistant I gained strong experience in many fields, such as strong communication and interpersonal skills(from dealing with the community), organisational skills(operation & logistics), plus management skills highlighted on my CV.



My career has included several years’ experience in customer service, administration and hospitality. I have worked in both small and medium-large organisation, covering a wide range of duties including organising meetings, organising travel, reception duties, scheduling interviews and other administration duties.



I am extremely interested in Event Assistant position as I feel my previous experience, along with my qualifications would be valuable assets to this role and to your organisation.



I would welcome the opportunity to come and discuss with you my details more fully. I am available for interview at any time and I look forward to meeting you in the near future.



Yours faithfully,



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Top answer

Hello, zuz-- and welcome to English Forums. I have underlined some problem areas and crossed out some unnecessary verbiage: Dear Sir/Madam : I am writing to enquire about any event/production assistant work that may be available in your organisation. As can be seen from my details I have a great deal of experience working in Events environment .

  • Hello, zuz-- and welcome to English Forums.
  • I have underlined some problem areas and crossed out some unnecessary verbiage: Dear Sir/Madam : I am writing to enquire about any event/production assistant work that may be available in your organisation.
  • As can be seen from my details I have a great deal of experience working in Events environment .
  • and I have enjoyed working in this environment and I would like to continue.
  • I have expertise and experience in successful event planning and administration.
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Hello, zuz-- and welcome to English Forums.

I have underlined some problem areas and crossed out some unnecessary verbiage:


Dear Sir/Madam:

I am writing to enquire about any event/production assistant work that may be available in your organisation.

As can be seen from my details I have a great deal of experience working

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