Can someone help me to correct this or make it a bit more powerful?
A friend of mine stated that this letter needs some strong motivation as well...
Thanks,
Alex
As a graduating researcher in stem cell biology, I am seeking a PhD program as a new challenge in my career. The scope of my experience includes PCR, RNA separation and analysis, flow cytometery and (stem) cell culture.
During my bachelor years, I gained experience in cytology and histoloy. Both subjects aroused my interest in cell biology. As a result of my excellent scores I was chosen to be a teaching assistant in these classes . My increasing curiosity persuaded me to continue in cell biology.
In 2009 I started a masters course in regenerative medicine and a master theses entitled: ‘Derivation of mesenchymal stem cells from human embryonic stem cells', expected to finish in 2011. During the past year of my master course my interest in stem cells continued to grow. Therefore I look forward to starting a PhD program in this field of study.
The possibility of working in a research lab as a PhD student is a lifetime ambition of mine. With nearly two years of stem cell experience, my determined attitude and motivation to learn, I believe that I can bring this project to a successful end.
For your convenience I have attached my CV for your review. I would certainly welcome the opportunity to participate in an interview to answer any of your questions and talk through my qualifications and experience. Thank you for your time and consideration and I look forward to speaking to you soon.
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I have rewritten an entire part. But sound the above one already good or is it like ****?
— Alextam
I have rewritten an entire part.
But sound the above one already good or is it like ****?
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