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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
Letter Writing

Cover letter

Hello everyone. Here is my cover letter. I would like to know if there is any mistakes. Thanks a lot.

"Highly interested by the program of European Volunteer Service, I am submitting my application.


Recently graduate and in search of an employment for some time, Volunteer European service seemed to me a very good choice to allow me to work abroad and to help an European association.



Very concerned by environment, Art, Heritage, History and European culture, I would like to participate in an organization in order to help the local development of a region.



This would also be a way for me to discover a new culture, a new language and to make the most of my knowledge for the good of the community while acquiring new skills.



I look forward to hearing from you soon."



Yours Faithfully"
  

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Dear Mr [surname]: I am very interested in your European Volunteer Service program , and I am submitting my application herewith . I am a recent graduate, and volunteer European service seems to me a very good choice to allow me to work abroad and at the same time to help a European association . I am very concerned about our environment , as well as about preserving our European art, our heritage and our culture, and I would like t o contribute to an appropriate organization's efforts toward the local development of a region.

  • Dear Mr [surname]: I am very interested in your European Volunteer Service program , and I am submitting my application herewith .
  • I am a recent graduate, and volunteer European service seems to me a very good choice to allow me to work abroad and at the same time to help a European association .
  • I am very concerned about our environment , as well as about preserving our European art, our heritage and our culture, and I would like t o contribute to an appropriate organization's efforts toward the local development of a region.
  • This would also be a way for me to discover a new culture and a new language, and to make the most of my knowledge for the good of the community while acquiring new skills.
  • I hope that you find my application of interest, and I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
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Dear Mr [surname]:

I am very interested in your European Volunteer Service program, and I am submitting my application herewith.

I am a recent graduate, and volunteer European service seems to me a very good choice to allow me to work abroad and at the same time to help a European association. I am very

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