Cover letter

Hi everyone, I'm living in Vietnam and looking for a new job, so please help me to correct this cover letter "Dear Sir/Madam, First of all, let me introduce myself as ABC – graduated BBM (Bachelor of Business Management) in Miranda Institute of Management Studies (MIMS) – India. Your company caught my attention with much enthusiasm. So I would like to come to you with a background that you will find unique and distinctive among your typical applicants. Over the past 2+ years, I have identified myself as a high sense responsibility and hard working. I am ready for new challenges and opportunities with my practical skills and appreciate experience with my education. Some of qualifications outlined above are representative of the value I offer the company and are more fully outlined in the enclosed resume. Combined with the enthusiasm, commitment and drive, I am confident that I would quickly become an efficient marketing employee. I would welcome the chance for an interview, even if on a purely exploratory basis. In advance, thank you for your time and attention. I am looking forward to your response. Yours Sincerely, XYZ Enclosure" I'm waiting for your correction of not only the grammars but also the sentences, is this ok for a cover letter. Many thanks to you.