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File walk 446 Posted 9 years ago
Grammar

Couple of things

Hi,

I'm wondering if the following make sense. I've inserted a comma before for dramatic effect


"We work with them to develop solutions they need, fast, enabling them to remain leaders in their field."


"He is responsible for the delivery of projects within set timelines while adhering to requirements stipulated by the board."


Thanks

  

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file walk 446"We work with them to develop solutions they need, fast, enabling them to remain leaders in their field."

It's not clear if you work with them quickly, or you develop solutions quickly

file walk 446"He is responsible for the delivery of projects within set timelines while adhering to requirements stipulated by the bo
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