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Ice2007 Posted 19 years ago
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1) We notice from our QC colleague last Saturday that, 10000pcs of EE441 were not ready in factory A for inspection, but is in factory B. The other lot of 1200pcs re-work cargoes were also not ready? The inspection date and factory location was based on your booking, if there was changed you should update us, but not our QC colleague.

2) Per Helen advice, you had agreed to set up a production line in factory A. However, we found that you did not into practice your commitment. Should you have any queries for this procedure, please contact Helen for further details
  

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Ice2007 1) We notice from the report submitted by our QC colleague last Saturday t hat 10 ,000pcs of EE441 were not ready in factory A for inspection, but were ready in factory B. Are th e other 1200pcs of re-wor ked items also not ready? The inspection date and factory location was based on your bookin g.

  • Ice2007 1) We notice from the report submitted by our QC colleague last Saturday t hat 10 ,000pcs of EE441 were not ready in factory A for inspection, but were ready in factory B.
  • Are th e other 1200pcs of re-wor ked items also not ready?
  • The inspection date and factory location was based on your bookin g.
  • If there were changes, you should update us, n ot our QC colleague.
  • 2) Following Helen 's advice, you had agreed to set up a production line in factory A.
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Ice20071) We notice from the report submitted by our QC colleague last Saturday that 10,000pcs of EE441 were not ready in factory A for inspection, but were ready in factory B. Are the other 1200pcs of
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1) We noticed from the report submitted by our QC colleague last Saturday that 10,000 pcs. of EE441 were not ready in factory A for inspection but were ready in factory B. Are the other 1200 pcs. of

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