Could you tell me what you think about my motivation letter ?
0 I have to submit it before tonight, I know it's quite late to ask for support but I just found out this very interesting web site. If you had some time to answer me before tonight that would be a great help. 02br 00I am applying for an internship in pwc's strategie department.02br 00Thank you for your help and your time02br 02br 00"02br 02br 00Miss, Mister, 02br 02br 02br 02br 00The knowledge, the notoriety and the quality of your formation lead me to propose my services to your company.02br 02br 00Willing to improve my self and to reach new challenges among your qualified colleagues, I think your summer internship would be a great opportunity for my future career.02br 02br 00After college, as I’ve always been very keen on all aspects that own trades between countries, I chose to study Economics in Paris I. My first three years of university were mostly based on macro and microeconomic theories, which was very interesting because it helped me to highlight the different mechanisms ruling the economy. 02br 02br 00Then I moved to 00 seeking for new experiences and a more practical education in Finance. There I also learned about different topics such as Corporate Strategy, Human resources, Marketing. Plus, my school laid emphasis on the importance of team work and team project which I have always been very attracted to. This knowledge gives me the ability to understand modern business in a rapid evolving world. 02br 02br 00This year, to complete my education and improve my English, as I consider speaking different languages very important to realise business in a global world, I moved to the Management School of Sheffield on an exchange program, which has been a great opportunity to discover the British culture and study in a new environment. 02br 02br 02br 02br 00With successful experiences in different business in 010200 and abroad, I consider myself to be quickly adaptable to various situations. Moreover, during my studies and summer jobs I’ve been lucky to meet a lot of people from very wide social classes which contributed to open largely my mind. 02br 02br 00I believe I could provide your company my analysing capacity, my teamwork spirit and my qualities in human relations which have always been appreciated.02br 02br 02br 02br 00Rigorous, determined I look forward to hearing from you and convince you of my motivation.02br 02br 00Should you have any questions, please contact me at 01u02u02br 01u02u02br 02br 01u02u02br 02br 00Sincerely00 02br 02br 02br 02br 00L Guillaume"0-
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