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Haha1 Posted 13 years ago
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First of all, the situation of world is very important to success. This means that a person is presented in crowd of people. For example, if Edison had lived in korea, he couldn’t have had a success in an innovation because Korea education makes students a study machine. In this situation, if Edison have a strange question about his idea, there is no answer and he will be disappointed.
  

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I have underlined some problem areas: First of all, the situation of world is very important to success. This means that a person is presented in crowd of people. For example, if Edison had lived in korea , he couldn’t have had a success in an innovatio n because Korea education makes students a study machine .

— Mister Micawber

  • I have underlined some problem areas: First of all, the situation of world is very important to success.
  • This means that a person is presented in crowd of people.
  • For example, if Edison had lived in korea , he couldn’t have had a success in an innovatio n because Korea education makes students a study machine .
  • In this situation, if Edison have a strange question about his idea , there is no answer and he will be disappointed.
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I have underlined some problem areas:

First of all, the situation of world is very important to success. This means that a person is presented in crowd of people. For example, if Edison had lived in korea, he couldn’t have had a success in an innovation because Korea education makes students a study machine. In this situation, if Edi
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Thank you! I try to fix them! Thank you teacher!!!!

First of all, the environment around people is a key success factor because people live together with other people. For example, if Edison had lived in Korea, he couldn’t have succeded in an innovation because Korea Education system turns students into a studying machine. In this situation, if Edison have a strange question about an idea
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First of all, the environment around people is a key success factor because people live together. For example, if Edison had lived in Korea, he could not have succeeded in an innovation because the Korean education system turns students into study machines. In this situation, if Edison had a strange question about an idea, there would be no answer. Thus, h
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Thank you for your correction. I really appreciated it!! Thank you!
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