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Haha1 Posted 14 years ago
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Since I am not a native speaker, I don't know what I did wrong. Thank you for your help in advance!
According to the research of the Korea Education Association, most Korean students want to study in America, and many Korean students are studying as an exchange student or a foreign student in America nevertheless, there are many teachers receiving high salary in Korea. Furthermore, many foreign students as well as Korean students are studying in America because America has more excellent educational programs than others. In this way, teachers' salaries is important of course, but it is more necessary for students to improve educational environment such as school amenities or professors' ability to teach students well.
According to the research of the Korea Education Association, most Korean students want to study in America, and many Korean students are studying as an exchange student or a foreign student in America nevertheless, there are many teachers receiving high salary in Korea. Furthermore, many foreign students as well as Korean students are studying in America because America has more excellent educational programs than others. In this way, teachers' salaries is important of course, but it is more necessary for students to improve educational environment such as school amenities or professors' ability to teach students well.
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Just stole a glance at the text. Many Korean students study as exchange or foreign students in the USA. Nevertheless, there are many teachers who receive high salaries in Korea.
- Just stole a glance at the text.
- Many Korean students study as exchange or foreign students in the USA.
- Nevertheless, there are many teachers who receive high salaries in Korea.
- Furthermore, many foreign as well as Korean students study in the USA because American educational programs are better than in other countries.
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Just stole a glance at the text.
...Many Korean students study as exchange or foreign students in the USA. Nevertheless, there are many teachers who receive high salaries in Korea. Furthermore, many foreign as well as Korean students study in the USA because American educational programs are better than in other countries. In this way, teachers' salaries are certainly important; however,..., s
...Many Korean students study as exchange or foreign students in the USA. Nevertheless, there are many teachers who receive high salaries in Korea. Furthermore, many foreign as well as Korean students study in the USA because American educational programs are better than in other countries. In this way, teachers' salaries are certainly important; however,..., s
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Snuppelina! Thank you so much! I really appreciated it!! Can I ask you one question?
What's the difference between those two sentences?
There are many teachers receiving high salaries.
There are many teachers who receive high salaries.
Can I omit 'who' and change verb form to -ing? because I learned from school that I can do that way.
What's the difference between those two sentences?
There are many teachers receiving high salaries.
There are many teachers who receive high salaries.
Can I omit 'who' and change verb form to -ing? because I learned from school that I can do that way.
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