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Eastern Magic Posted 20 years ago
Grammar

could you tell me I am right or worng. here.?

Hello every single professional in grammar or in reading skills.

Just tell me about my paragraph are there any mistake?

Run-ons, fragment, punctuation, title, transit words, and any things you think it's wrong.. please be fast I need it tomorrow..

And be careful there is 50 marks.. thanks a lot

Thanks very much.. Emotion: smile

"The Environment Threat"

There are many things threat the environment in our planet, The Earth. The Earth is the planet which we live on. First of all, some bad behaviors in our life, for example, throw the wastes in public places. Public places as Gardens, Parks, and Beaches. In addition, using The Insect Destructives and hair spry which has CFCs. CFCs is the first enemy for The Ozone Layer. A Second, the personal benefits, for instance, people who cutting forests trees wood because this hurt many kinds of animals like Banda. Another example of the personal benefits is over fishing in Seas, Oceans, and Rivers. The last and most important thing is the chemical victories. This kind of factories increase the polluted gas in air by burning coal and oil and this create bad gas hurt people. Polluted gas brings many kinds of ills of the respirator for people, such as, Cough, and Asthma. Also, some of Chemical factories throw the wastes of it in seas and oceans. As a result, this is our planet, so we have to work to save our home.
  

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There are many things threat the environment in our planet, The Earth. The Earth is the planet which we live on. First of all, some bad behaviors in our life, for example, throw the wastes in public places.

— Marius Hancu

  • There are many things threat the environment in our planet, The Earth.
  • The Earth is the planet which we live on.
  • First of all, some bad behaviors in our life, for example, throw the wastes in public places.
  • Public places as G ardens, P arks, and Beaches.
  • In addition, using The Insect Destructives and hair spry which has CFCs.
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There are many things threat the environment in our planet, The Earth. The Earth is the planet which we live on. First of all, some bad behaviors in our life, for example, throw the wastes in public places. Public places as
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I am sorry ..can you be more clear I could not understand?
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Hello, Eastern Magic,

Marius Hancu has chosen to color the errors rather than correct them. By his marking of the errors, you have a chance to think about how they might be wrong. Try and correct them first, post your effort, then we will show you the correct version. Good luck.

(By the way, it's kind of hard to read yellow print.)
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There are many thing Threat the environment in our planet, The Earth. The Earth is the planet which we live on. First of all, some behaviors in our daily life, for example, throw the wastes in public places. Public places as Gardens, Parks, and Beaches. In addition, using The Insect Kills and Hair spry which has CFCs. CFCs is the first enemy for Ozone Layer. A Second, the pe
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Easter Magic,

How did you set up your PC? Your punctuation and curosr are working backwards.
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(In AmE and BrE, the margin is 'justified' on the left side of the page.)

Here are my suggested corrections. I have tried to preserve your words as much as possible:

There are many things that threaten the environment of our planet Earth. First of all, the threat comes from some of our behavior patterns in daily life, such as littering public places like
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Thanks a lot ..you really helped me..

And I am here for any service(not grammar)
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