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Youngmi Kim Posted 11 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
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Art education for social justice can find ultimate value in that through art education, it can contribute to human lives by putting an educational effort to qualitatively improve students’ lives. Through this study, the effort to make this the meaningful education reality will be diffused in our social context for learners, beyond understanding theoretical justification of art education for social justice. With this, through art education, each student hopefully will pursue ‘good life’, dream ‘good world’, and fulfil it.
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In the first clause, I would add a comma after “…in that” Later in that same clause, “by putting an educational effort into ” rather than “to”. And (same clause) “improving” instead of “improve”. Finally, the word, “fulfill” has one more “l”.
- In the first clause, I would add a comma after “…in that” Later in that same clause, “by putting an educational effort into ” rather than “to”.
- And (same clause) “improving” instead of “improve”.
- Finally, the word, “fulfill” has one more “l”.
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In the first clause, I would add a comma after “…in that”
Later in that same clause, “by putting an educational effort into” rather than “to”.
And (same clause) “improving” instead of “improve”.
Finally, the word, “fulfill” has one more “l”.
Later in that same clause, “by putting an educational effort into” rather than “to”.
And (same clause) “improving” instead of “improve”.
Finally, the word, “fulfill” has one more “l”.
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