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Youngmi Kim Posted 11 years ago
Letter Writing

Could you tell me any mistakes in my thesis?

This study has a purpose for extending the possibility of art education which can contribute to the real lives of students through the concept of social justice.
Connecting the two fields; social justice and art education is a practical strategy of public art to be embodied with educational field.
This study has started from cognizing the fact that social justice is about a life itself we can’t think apart from our own lives.
  

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How about: The purpose of this study is to explore ways in which art education can contribute to the lives of students through the concept of social justice. Connecting the two fields, social justice and art education, is a practical strategy which can be embodied within the educational field. This study began by recognizing that social justice is about life itself; we cannot disassociate our ideas from our own lives.

  • How about: The purpose of this study is to explore ways in which art education can contribute to the lives of students through the concept of social justice.
  • Connecting the two fields, social justice and art education, is a practical strategy which can be embodied within the educational field.
  • This study began by recognizing that social justice is about life itself; we cannot disassociate our ideas from our own lives.
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How about:
The purpose of this study is to explore ways in which art education can contribute to the lives of students through the concept of social justice. Connecting the two fields, social justice and art education, is a practical strategy which can be embodied within the educational field. This study began by recognizing that social justice is about life itself; we cannot disassociate o
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Thank you again Blue Jay!! I tried to put whole thesis, but by mistake I posted only these. You are amazing! Could you help me with my next one too? I post it but It yet not shown up.
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The whole thesis might be a bit too big of a chunk at one time for anyone to work on, but a paragraph at a time is manageable.
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I have to leave for a while, but I expect to be back in a few hours. If no-one else has helped you in the meantime I'll take a look at your other questions then.
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Youngmi;

Please ask your question with each of your posts. Otherwise, we don't know what you are asking.

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